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Thread #124438   Message #2750742
Posted By: GUEST,Gloucesterman, David Coffin
22-Oct-09 - 10:08 PM
Thread Name: A Shanty for Barry Finn
Subject: RE: A Shanty for Barry Finn
Amos,
Really like your tune and your voice. Reminded me of Gordon Bok. Nicely done. Please don't think me presumptuous; my ear wanted the last note to end down on the fifth. Haul away for Barry (moving by syllable:1-1-1-6-6-5) See what you think. It leaves it kind of unresolved. Like maybe....?
David