The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #79154   Message #2767096
Posted By: Cromdubh
16-Nov-09 - 01:22 PM
Thread Name: What makes a good song?
Subject: RE: What makes a good song?
The one about the soldier is a work in process, the soldier in question is the one that gets his ear cut off by Peter on good thursday, he is healed. But I wanted the listener to think of Iraq of some such place in the opening lines, I need to work on the clarity of the story. I still don't know where I want to end it.

thanks for the encouragement.