The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #56732   Message #2773598
Posted By: VirginiaTam
25-Nov-09 - 02:41 PM
Thread Name: Mudcat Poetry Corner
Subject: RE: Mudcat Poetry Corner
Amergin

Mommy's sick is heart rending. Jacinta's birthday party - love all the allusion to ancient pagan ritualism. The line
   
       "The light dampens the strength of the fire"

moves me beyond words to describe. Leaves me feebly fumbling for wondrous dreams lost upon waking.