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Thread #20591 Message #2792812
Posted By: GUEST,Nevar Mare II
20-Dec-09 - 11:46 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Mallon's Bridge (Michael Hough)
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Mallon's Bridge (Michael Hough)
well done, but the line "I'll tell you of the slithery marks shining in the road" is actually, "I'll tell you of the tracks of cloven hooves there in the road"