It's getting there, Dan! Nice song (Lazy Afternoon) by the way. I'd still get the vocals a little closer to the mic, personally - but I'm not you, and you must do it your way.

Using a mic is really using another instrument and you can get a range of sounds, without resorting to FX, by altering distance, projection, volume, intensity, attack, etc. That's where singing "live" to an audience with a mic is a really good experience - gives you the opportunity to try all these things out. :-)