The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #24629   Message #282786
Posted By: Naemanson
22-Aug-00 - 07:25 PM
Thread Name: Tall Ships and Flour Babies
Subject: RE: Tall Ships and Flour Babies
It doesn't have the rhythm or language of a shanty. It could be a poem.

"Breasting the soft, sunny, blue rising main" and "Sail for a sunrise that burns with new maybes" These are not lines you would find in a shanty.

Plus a shanty would have a more definitive rhythm. A very clear motion to help a crew keep in time together as they work.