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Thread #120107   Message #2839150
Posted By: catspaw49
14-Feb-10 - 02:46 PM
Thread Name: BS: WalkaboutsVerse Anew
Subject: RE: BS: WalkaboutsVerse Anew
No cheap shot at all but honest comment upon your work when I say:

- Your poetry sucks.....Forced meter and/or rhyme with poor constrution overall; the words themselves make me believe you swallowed a Thesaurus.

- It has been posted repeatedly before.......Why not just link it? Do you see others here doing anything like this? Many will agree that your "Life's Work" is free to be posted but certainly not repeatedly for your own puerile need.

- It is full of bigoted and racist statements........Most have been poinyed out to you repeatedly and yet you seem to think that bigoted renmarks are not so if you don't think they are. A bigot is a bigot, if only by accident and if they "mean well."


- That which isn't racist is often incredidbly juvenile........Virtually every one of your supposed poems is juvenile in both content and construction.

- It is obvious to most that you have limited knowledge of the world, especially considering your supposed travels.........If you have traveled, it is obvious you learned nothing from it.


Spaw