The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #127549 Message #2846953
Posted By: Murray MacLeod
22-Feb-10 - 03:34 PM
Thread Name: Any tips for working on phrasing?
Subject: RE: Any tips for working on phrasing?
Everybody gets their phrasing wrong sometimes.
One of the greatest phrasing screw-ups in folk music, which has been committed by almost everybody who has recorded Raglan Road, occurs on the final couplet ,
"When the angel woos the clay, he'll lose
His wings at the dawn of the day"
ALmost everybody puts a pause after "woos" and then sings "the clay he'll lose" as a single phrase, with a following pause, then the final line.
Makes a total nonsense of the meaning of the last two lines.
Even Luke Kelly wasn't exempt ...