Kat it was suppose to be wasted all the time, I am going to rewrite the line cause I to don't think it fits well, I got to smooth out the lyrics a bit for sure ...

do you folks think the simple melody is ok?

holding the by and the fine too long for sure, it annoys me also. It was my first recording test on this one. I didn't care for it much but wanted to run it by others before trashing. Now it sounds like it is worth fixing maybe