BBS - not a personal attack - you asked for constructive comments, I hope these are...
Little things can distract from a visual impact - the bit of string hanging down from the guitar neck annoyed me almost immediately and constantly drew my attention away from the singing. That added to the windows behind you and the step ladder behind your head all shout "You-tube video" rather than "Proper Video put onto You-tube".
Quack!
Geoff the Duck.