The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #59418   Message #2935532
Posted By: Amos
27-Jun-10 - 10:51 AM
Thread Name: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
Subject: RE: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
Rapaire:

That was a heroic piece, indeed. I would refine a couple of the rhyming ends, but a heroic piece overall.

I wrote a similar ballad some time ago concerning an Australian swimming coach who took to putting a salty in the pool with his swim-team in order to inspire them to new bursts of speed.

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