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Thread #130640 Message #2941593
Posted By: Herga Kitty
08-Jul-10 - 02:38 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: City Lament (Keith Marsden)
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: City Lament by Keith Marsden
Dennis - I wouldn't alter the guy line if I were you, as the verse is meant to underline how rough the area was, in an OTT sort of way. And how is it worse than telling people to ignore the "ghostly drunkard beating up his wife"?