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Thread #133666 Message #3036078
Posted By: beardedbruce
19-Nov-10 - 01:10 PM
Thread Name: BS: The Royal Engagement: a Sonnet
Subject: RE: BS: The Royal Engagement: a Sonnet
Lizzie,
It is a nice verse- BUT IT IS NOT A GOOD SONNET!
IF one calls something a specific form, it should be in that form.
If I call my viola a guitar, does that give it 2 more strings????
As a poem, I like it- but as a sonnet it has serious flaws.