In the hope that no-one does ask for this thread to be deleted, a couple more corrections.

I've never heard the song Station People, but I'm sure that in v.3 Brenda must be a season ticket vendor, i.e. one who sells season tickets (though I can't imagine why she should specialise in that rather than sell all kinds of tickets).

And in v.6 Doncaster seems a lot more likely than Duncaster.

Richard