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Thread #134581   Message #3063126
Posted By: Rafflesbear
29-Dec-10 - 04:37 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Dave Goulder Train Songs
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Dave Goulder Train Songs
Ais Gill

"Steel hammers hard at the steel, carriages crumple to splinters"

I think this should be

"Steel hammers hard INTO steel, carriages crumple to splinters" ie a collision