Isn't anyone going to take the bait of my tune of 29 Dec 10 - 03:04 PM (to the lyrics of Alaska Mike 29 Dec 10 - 11:31 AM; please read my post of 30 Dec 10 - 05:50 AM as well)? Have Mudcatters suddenly become too shy to hit at others' exposed weaknesses? "Grishka, your melody is quite good for a start, but ..." is what I expect to read. Too regular? How would you further break up the scheme without harming the character of the lyrics? If you find the "poem" too banal, suggest another one. We should not strive for perfection, but illustrate our criterea.