The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #139431   Message #3202402
Posted By: Jack the Sailor
05-Aug-11 - 09:08 PM
Thread Name: BS: Let's write a truly bad piece of fiction
Subject: RE: BS: Let's write a truly bad piece of fiction
Jake's face went blank. His body relaxed. His eyes rolled up into his head.

He was receiving a call. It was Chongo.