Guest, 999 you are on the right track. Your song needs a strong chorus so that people can join in. I like the lines "I see justice standing proud, I hear freedom singing loud". I like your last verse a lot.

"Corporate sons-of-bitches" might be accurate but too hard to digest in a song.

You could however reference the Robber One Percent. If we can avoid excessive name calling in a song, it could reach more people.


Keep it up! More songs everyone!