The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #141016   Message #3243081
Posted By: Stringsinger
22-Oct-11 - 12:41 PM
Thread Name: Occupy Wall Street Songs
Subject: RE: Occupy Wall Street Songs
Guest, 999 you are on the right track. Your song needs a strong chorus so that people can join in. I like the lines "I see justice standing proud, I hear freedom singing loud". I like your last verse a lot.

"Corporate sons-of-bitches" might be accurate but too hard to digest in a song.

You could however reference the Robber One Percent. If we can avoid excessive name calling in a song, it could reach more people.

Keep it up! More songs everyone!