Mudcat Café message #3244360

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Thread #83915 Message #3244360
Posted By: GUEST,blogward
25-Oct-11 - 04:23 AM
Thread Name: The Wiser Maid (please critique!)
Subject: RE: The Wiser Maid (please critique!)

My 20pence worth:

I put my lips close by his ear and whispered to him, "No."