My "written this morning" song went over like a ton of bricks on a lead balloon named "Titanic". I think people expected a serious song and got some awkward-for-a-serious-song terms and wacky alliteration. "Water fell like rain"? Really? Or maybe it just sucked. Funny--my voice was relatively OK, then I got home and it went south again.

(I fixed a song title of mine and the spelling of somebody else's. Been workin' at the test scoring mines all day and I wanna correct some shit.)