The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #142181   Message #3275651
Posted By: EBarnacle
17-Dec-11 - 06:02 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Take a trip on the canal
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Take a trip on the canal
"She'd open the window dips up a supply."
perhaps, "She'd open the window dip up a supply."

"Captain muse gently while the cook is on deck."
The audio is "Pat the mule gently while the cook is on deck"

"The fume nearly choke you so greasy the floor."
Perhaps, "The fumes nearly choke you so greasy the air." The rhyme loses but logic wins out.

"In the food you could taste it, the captain would rare,
But one look from her and the weather was fair."
Perhaps,
"In the food you could taste it, the captain would swear,
But one look from her and the weather was fair."

"And if you would cross her she'd try raise the dead."
Perhaps "And if you would cross her she'd cry raise the dead."

"Beat the bow's man and snub string a paddle divine."
Perhaps "Beat the bow man and snub string a paddle divine.
If someone can figure out what "snub string a paddle" means, I'd like to know.