Morwen, you may have missed it, but I posted to your other thread with reference to BrassGoggles, the Steampunk forum, where you will almost certainly find people interested in reading, advising and critiquing your fantasy piece.

There is even a dedicated sub-forum for people who write steampunk fiction under "Textual". If you want some decent feedback on your fantasy, and as it seems you're unlikely to get what you're after here, I really would encourage you to check it out.

Unfortunately it seems to be down at the moment, but it's a really thriving and creative little on-line/real life community and you may enjoy it.