Yes, that version is easier to understand, friend-of-mine. The personal flourishes. however. seem to me to lose the tune. As soon as we know if this is indeed the song ollaimh needs I'd be glad to help transcribe it.

It's so frustrating; I had written out the whole thing directly from Peta's singing, and that paper has gone to ashes with the rest of my library. I used to sing it, and that's gone too, leaving little echoes in my memory.