Peter, certainly there is more than one solution and a wide range of tastes, as we observed before, but some are worse than others. Phil tells us he is "less pleased" with his ideas, so we are discussing how to become more pleased. A public performer should also try to please and impress the audience. (BTW note that in my above proposal harmonies slightly differ in the repeated parts.)

Leeneia, you're welcome; of course everything I post here is donated to the public domain. This piece I would qualify as a study rather than a finished arrangement, but I allow anyone including Phil to make whatever use of it as they wish, at their own risk.

I am looking forward to further comments, as specific as possible. After all, most of us including myself are here to learn, not only to teach.