Thank you again for allowing me the opportunity to vent about some truly horrible writing. As for positive feed back. Ebbie covered that nicely.

You, jackass that you apparently are, attacked her.

I shall endeavor to give you positive feedback. You make too many unverifiable claims. Your writing style in this piece is hysterical. The sentence structure makes it difficult to read.

My I please ask what you makes you an authority on each of these things?
L. Ron Hubbard,
Dianetics
Scientology
bad science-fiction
pseudo-Crowleyan occultism

You are presenting yourself as a historian but you are not supporting you "conclusions" or writing in an intelligible or professional way.

You write for a living? Cool! Do you get paid for writing of that quality? If so please tell us who pays you. I have some chimps banging on typewriters in a warehouse testing probability theory. I'd sure like to get paid for their efforts.

Again, thank you so much for this chance to vent.