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Thread #145990 Message #3380276
Posted By: The Sandman
23-Jul-12 - 06:53 AM
Thread Name: song of the shepherd, dick miles
Subject: RE: song of the shepherd, dick miles
it is a good line in my opinion because you have an internal rhyme twin with a skin, but it could be graft and switch and twin with a skin.