Cheers for the feedback guys. If you ever want to have a look at my new stuff, here's a song that's a bit more developed, although I am still learning.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8axOA67Hap4

I am going to university by the way, and collaborating with singers and bands. That way, people like Dave who have the attention span of a brain damaged monkey can enjoy my music for longer than 30 seconds.