I like, as I usually do, the original verses better...I think it is rare that a song is improved on, but whatever works is good...

there is a word called tempestuous..slight difference in spelling

Tempestuous | Define Tempestuous at Dictionary.com
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adjective 1. characterized by or subject to tempests : the tempestuous ocean. 2. of the nature of or resembling a tempest : a tempestuous wind. 3. tumultuous