Accent no problem for me. Vin Garbutt is from Middlesbrough which is where I live.

Filling in some gaps

v.2 - Very soon a Boro' moon... - Boro' is how the locals refer to Middlesbrough.

v.3 Her loveliness and Eastern dress placed others in the shade.

The other words in square brackets are as you thought.

Other bits of info.

Acklam is a district of Middlesbrough
Linthorpe road runs due south from Middlesbrough centre. I used to drive up to work every day before I retired.

The last verse, fairly obvious they have moved away from both of their families but not very far. Stockton is on the North Bank of the river Tees, Middlesbrough is on the south bank.