The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #52556   Message #3628806
Posted By: BobKnight
28-May-14 - 08:35 PM
Thread Name: Dowie Dens of Yarrow
Subject: RE: Dowie Dens of Yarrow
Leeneia. If you remove "that" from the last line it will scan better. It's one of those words that people stick in all the time when they are writing songs, and nine times out of ten it can be dispensed with.