Agree with Tdm, but as you invited advice, I tentatively, and admittedly subjectively, offer these thoughts. I certainly see you have a good stage presence, and get the audience involved. The succession of snippets certainly demonstrate that. However, as no complete songs were included, it is difficult to gauge the comedy content, if comedy clubs are your target.   There is nothing wrong with your vocals or guitar, best I can tell, but neither was I blown away by it.......much like my own abilities !.   So if you are aiming for general music, you are probably competing with a lot of other good and competent performers.   So, as above, patience and perseverance. Wishing you best, Alan.      Pete.