Hi Bonzo. I listened to your song. I agree with you that it's a good one. Reminds me of Elvis.

However, the years have passed, and as an (ahem) mature female, I'm disturbed by its combination of aggressive plus dependent. My advice to any young woman facing this mix of emotions in a lover would be, "Sweetie, head for the hills!"

The Beatles had a short song that included,

Oh darling, if you leave me, I'll never make it alone.
Believe when I tell you, I'll never do you no harm!

That song gave me the whimwhams, and even when it was new I hoped it was a parody.