You do have a real gift for this kind of fiction, Rap. It only falls down when you bring the Chimps in, because everyone knows that the Chinga character is bogus, and the "Chonga" character, of course, is nothing more than a distorted projection of your own emotional need to mess around with my favorite characters and attempt to trash them.

Sad, really. But I forgive you. There is no sense in holding enmity against a mind that simply cannot help itself.

Other than that, though, pretty darned good!