The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #79154 Message #3804221
Posted By: Cromdubh
08-Aug-16 - 04:40 PM
Thread Name: What makes a good song?
Subject: RE: What makes a good song?
Revisiting this site for the first time in a while. Prompted me to revisit one of my songs posted earlier
The Hook
A heavy splash, a silver flash n the corner of the eye The ripples spread out far and wide, The creator just out of sight. But ripples become waves and waves become storms that crash on the shores of the soul, And when the surge subsides, all you will find is a single sparkling scale.
A fisherman sits and stares at the see, tying up his six string rod, And swimming round his head is a story of a fish that has never been caught. He ties on a little rock to act as a weight Digs down through the roots and earth Pulls up a fat worm for to be the bait but there's one little thing he's forgot
Chorus What you need is a hook, Yeah What you need is a hook, Yeah A small twist of faith, a whole lot of luck what you need is a hook, , Yeah Once it sinks in, it's in there for good Just like bitter sweet love All you need is a hook, , , Yeah
A fish on the line, a moment in time, That one that go away, So join the old man and Captain Ahab, Spinning yarn in the Mudcat Cafe Like Christ on the cross, show the size of your loss I'd swear it was as big as a whale But every good tragedy, is the trophy That you can mount on the wall,
Chorus What you need is a hook, Yeah What you need is a hook, Yeah A small twist of faith, a whole lot of luck what you need is a hook, , Yeah Once it sinks in, it's in there for good Just like bitter sweet love All you need is a hook, , , Yeah