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Thread #161323 Message #3832557
Posted By: leeneia
14-Jan-17 - 11:42 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Gender-neut lyrics for One Man's Hands?
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Gender-neut lyrics for One Man's Hands?
Hi, Lady Thorn. Here's an idea. You will have to use two quick notes where only one used to be. No big deal.
ORIGINAL
1. One man's hands can't build a world of peace
A woman's hands can't build a world of peace
NEW
1. One pair of hands can't build a world of peace.
One set of hands....
Use this pattern for hands, eyes, ears
ORIGINAL
4. One man's words can't set a people free
A woman's words can't set a people free
NEW
One person's words can't set a people free
One speaker's words....
ORIGINAL
5. One man's heart can't fill the world with love
A woman's heart can't fill the world with love
NEW
One human heart can't fill the world with love
One person's heart can't fill............