The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #162218   Message #3859240
Posted By: Keith A of Hertford
06-Jun-17 - 11:37 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: The Recruited Collier's Tale
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: The Recruited Collier's Tale
You chose the shortened version of the final verse.
You could add something like this, and better I'm sure.

For three long years she followed me,
Now I must march without her,
There's nothing left for us to do,
Until the wars are over,

My heart......