Hi, Matthew -

Musically, I liked the song quite well. The voice and guitar and harmonica were all balanced quite well. I hate recordings where the instruments overpower the voice, and this recording didn't do that.

But as I said, the story told by the song did not capture my imagination, and that's a problem.
I watched a few other videos you did. The guitar work was good, but I couldn't understand the vocals at all. Maybe it would be a good idea to take a few lessons from a voice instructor. I did that, and I found it helped my singing a lot.

-Joe-