The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #163606   Message #3905527
Posted By: Andy7
13-Feb-18 - 05:05 PM
Thread Name: The Perfect Couplet
Subject: RE: The Perfect Couplet
These are the opposite of the kind of perfect couplet you're talking about, as they use much overworked rhymes that are not, in themselves, clever at all.

But I always thought there was a kind of perfection in the sparse couplets of 'Memories Are Made of This', each managing to paint a vivid picture in just 8 words:

One girl, one boy,
Some grief, some joy.

Your lips and mine,
Two sips of wine.

One man, one wife,
One love through life.