Jeri, your song is wonderful as is
And
I hope you'll mold it into what you feel is the finished product. It is a lovely piece of writing. Mario would be so touched.

To Leo's siblings, Jan and Lauri, welcome to Mudcat. I hope you'll find some comfort here as you realize how well-loved and deeply appreciated your brother has been in this community. There's a net here that reaches across borders and oceans. Know that you and your family are being held in it now.
KT