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Thread #14386   Message #3997100
Posted By: Joe Offer
20-Jun-19 - 12:47 AM
Thread Name: Origins: When I'm Gone (Phil Ochs)
Subject: DT Correction: When I'm Gone (Phil Ochs)
Felipa send me a personal message pointing out some problems with the DT lyrics:
Here's a recording of the song from the There But for Fortune [Elektra] compilation album: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CXVBPRlm-qw
WHEN I'M GONE (DT Lyrics)
(Phil Ochs)

(CDE-) CGCAm/FG/CAm/FGC

There's no place in this world where I'll belong when I'm gone
And I won't know the right from the wrong when I'm gone
You won't find me singing on this song when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

I wont feel the flowing of the time when I'm gone
All the pleasures of love will not be mine when I'm gone
My pen won't pour a lyric line when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

And I won't breath the brandy air when I'm gone
I can't even worry 'bout my cares when I'm gone
Won't be asked to do my share when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

I won't be running from the rain when I'm gone
I can't even suffer from the pain when I'm gone
Can't say who's afraid and who's to blame when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

BREAK

I won't see the golden of the sun when I'm gone
All the evenings and the mornings will be one when I'm gone
Cant be singing louder than the guns when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

All my days wont be dances of delight when I'm gone
And the sands will be shifting from my sight when I'm gone
Cant add my name into the fight when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

I wont be laughing at the lies when I'm gone
And I cant question how or when or why when I'm gone
I can't live proud enough to die when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

There's no place in this world where I'll belong when I'm gone
And I won't know the right from the wrong when I'm gone
You won't find me singing on this song when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

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Copyright Appleseed Music, Inc.
Performed at the July 1986 Augusta festival by Magpie and
recorded on Magpie at Augusta 1986, Music from Augusta, SCS-606

filename[ WHNIGONE
DC
WHEN I'M GONE (my corrections)
(Phil Ochs)

(CDE-) CGCAm/FG/CAm/FGC

There's no place in this world where I'll belong when I'm gone
And I won't know the right from the wrong when I'm gone
And you won't find me singing on this song when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

And I won't feel the flowing of the time when I'm gone
All the pleasures of love will not be mine when I'm gone
My pen won't pour a lyric line when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

And I won't breathe the bracin' air when I'm gone
And I can't even worry 'bout my cares when I'm gone
Won't be asked to do my share when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

And I won't be running from the rain when I'm gone
And I can't even suffer from the pain when I'm gone
Can't say who's to praise and who's to blame when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

BREAK

Won't see the golden of the sun when I'm gone
And the evenings and the mornings will be one when I'm gone
Can't be singing louder than the guns while I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

All my days won't be dances of delight when I'm gone
And the sands will be shifting from my sight when I'm gone
Can't add my name into the fight while I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

And I won't be laughing at the lies when I'm gone
And I can't question how or when or why when I'm gone
Can't live proud enough to die when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

There's no place in this world where I'll belong when I'm gone
And I won't know the right from the wrong when I'm gone
And you won't find me singing on this song when I'm gone
So I guess I'll have to do it, I guess I'll have to do it it, guess I'll have to do it while I'm here

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Copyright Appleseed Music, Inc.
Performed at the July 1986 Augusta festival by Magpie and
recorded on Magpie at Augusta 1986, Music from Augusta, SCS-606

filename[ WHNIGONE
DC

I transcribed what I heard on the recording - it was a live performance. Ochs sang "while I'm gone" in a few places instead of "when." I noted that, but I prefer "when" in all circumstances.

this video is a rather sloppy performance by Ochs with Arlo Guthrie. Ochs does sing "brandy air" in this one, and sings "there's nothing I can lose or I can gain" instead of praise/blame.

-Joe-