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Thread #46626   Message #3999416
Posted By: leeneia
05-Jul-19 - 02:05 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Tow Rope Girls (C Fox Smith)
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Tow Rope Girls (C Fox Smith)
I agree with you, Charlie. In Cicely's poem, the "girls" are winds, and the spirit is playful.    In the newer lyrics, the girls are human beings doing a back-breaking job, and the image of that is nothing playful.

At the modern art museum near me I once saw a painting based on an old photograph. The painting was called "Mother and Daughter," and it showed two Chinese women, their backs bent almost double, hauling a barge. I estimate that the mother weighed maybe 110 pounds, and the daughter 85-90. Terrible!
I feel sure that they were in serious danger of ruined backs.

Let's stick with Cicely.