Thanks to NightWing and Starship for the comments on the lyrics. I posted from a draft copy of the Rise Again songbook. I think the final print version came out OK, but I can see that I missed some things. I proofread that book three times before it went to print, and other people proofread it also, but still some mistakes slipped through. Working on a 1200-song songbook was a daunting task.
-Joe-