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Thread #57803 Message #4021011
Posted By: Mick Pearce (MCP)
24-Nov-19 - 07:02 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Between The Wars (Billy Bragg)
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Between The Wars (Billy Bragg)
A couple of minor corrections Joe:
v1 l3 time not times
v4 l4 And mine is the peace not Mine is the peace
And one more serious change:
v2 l3 But they brought not And they brought, which alters the emphasis considerably.
Mick
Thanks, Mick. Your third change, but they brought, made it to print, but not the other two.