In the first stanza, "Especially when it happens he's an exile" should be "Especially when it happens he's in exile" I believe

Second stanza, wonder should be wonders

In the version I listened to (on Spotify), in the middle of the second to last stanza (after "laugh as they flow") it skips to "but dreams they don't last" instead of the humble shack lyrics, skipping the "And then into a humble shack I wonder" 4 line grouping entirely.

Not really a correction, but the odd and erratic-seeming switches from 4-8 line stanzas is a bit odd to me.

Otherwise, sounds good.