The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #168373 Message #4068015
Posted By: Charley Noble
11-Aug-20 - 02:08 PM
Thread Name: Song Challenge: The Great Storm is over
Subject: RE: Song Challenge: The Great Storm is over
Here's a rework of the first verse:
Now in four long years we’ve not sighted land; The captain's on deck, he’s not fit to command; The winds they do roar and the waves they do roll; Let’s now seize this ship and save our poor souls!