I would like to hear more stories. I have always written them; it is an exercise I like.

However, Mrrzy! I like the ending of your story but it would never have occurred to me- made a shiver go down my spine. Do, please, give us more!

Rap, that, except for your typo, sounds like pretty typical big brother stuff. I have a feeling you also made ups some stories that kept your brother staring wide-eyed in the night. :)