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Thread #171639 Message #4151720
Posted By: cnd
01-Sep-22 - 05:52 PM
Thread Name: Blacksmith's lovesong-As long as the smoke goes up
Subject: RE: Blacksmith's lovesong-As long as the smoke goes up
Your transcription sounds right to me. I might change "Let's be game" to "Let's be gay", which is a more logical phrase but a worse rhyme. Otherwise, looks perfect.