I have edited.

It must be a printed, hardcopy with margins for notes and questions. For the author a "double blind" clears doubts. Meeting, but without discussing the text or seeing the second editor.

Establishing which "style handbook" from the start, is perhaps, the most difficult phase.

Sincerely,
Gargoyle
Errors abound in e-text. The audacity to submit spoken translation, unedited, is the future.
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