This is a continuation of the Songwriting thread. Let's leave that one to general discussion of writing tools and make this one for we brave souls that are willing to put our songs up for peer discussion.
To that end, I ask everyone to be gentle. Bear in mind how important it is to you to hear both truth and kindness about what you wrote and treat others the same. Let's see how positive we can make this.
It is important to me to know how my songs work, and what doesn't work; not just get them praised. It is also important to hear what others like.
Having said that, What's the difference between a puppy and a songwriter?
After six months the puppy stops whining.
Blessings,
Barbara