The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #7359   Message #44447
Posted By: Peter T.
06-Nov-98 - 09:18 AM
Thread Name: Songwriter's Forum
Subject: RE: Songwriter's Forum
Dear harpgirl, great song, I like the Clinton line! the only dull line is the one about "roll in the hay" -- that is too ordinary. g iven that the rhyme is "ay" you ought to be able to give it a sexier thrust (ahem).

Question (irrelevant like most of mine): as a longtime singer of the "Lakes of Ponchartrain" (I know there is a thread on this), what are these lakes? Are they a bunch of finger lakes, or swamps, or pools, or what? Are there 2 or 12, big or small?

Yours, Peter